Standing at a cool lonely bight,
It seems me an adorned wight,
Which always prove itself right,
And survives the darkened fight.
Orchard of scattered stars' light,
Flowing as diminishing and bright,
Unique are those vast delight,
Who come in the cozy twilight.
No word is left with me to dight,
Presented by it a beautiful sight,
Thus hold strong grip very tight,
& in the end comes always might.
Anupam fortunate to welcome night,
B'coz it always pave way for light.
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you are very right,
im very delight,
you presented good sight,
your poem has a future bright.
am I right????
yes I am alwyas right.
nice one !
we expect this and more from you !
very nice poem.....
more & more expection...
regards
arsh
आपके ब्लॉग पर बड़ी खूबसूरती से विचार व्यक्त किये गए हैं, पढ़कर आनंद का अनुभव हुआ. कभी मेरे शब्द-सृजन (www.kkyadav.blogspot.com)पर भी झाँकें !!
Beautyful poem...regards
नववर्ष की हार्दिक ढेरो शुभकामना
अग्रवाल जी को नव वर्ष की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएं
wow! perfect combination and thought.
Orchard of scattered stars' light,
Flowing as diminishing and bright,
Unique are those vast delight,
Who come in the cozy twilight
thanks
A very beautiful poem Anupam ji ....Night always paves a way for light :)
Very well said sir. There is always hope.
Beautiful poem.
दिल को छू लेने वाली रचना..आभार प्रस्तुति का.
शुभकामनाएं........
आपकी शानदार शायरी के लिए बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया !
बहुत बढिया!! इसी तरह से लिखते रहिए !
Anupam fortunate to welcome night,
B'coz it always pave way for light.
this is a positive keep it up sir
shyam
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